Wednesday, April 11, 2012

You lost me...

Stroke tenderly my love
Leaf pleads the wind

But was the wind to listen
With all his might
In fieriness or may be fright
He shook the leaf
And passed by

Falling apart from the tree
She could say just these
Oh my love you lost me…

My amateurish attempt to write a tiny poem!

8 comments:

  1. you really can't call it an amateur's attempt! It's pretty good!

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  2. This is really great work Richa

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  3. @ AdiSin: Thanks a lot..thats really motivating :)

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  4. An amateurish attempt which turned out so beautifully.

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  5. @Saru Singhal: Coming from you..means a lot! thanks :)

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  6. I remember reading it and my thoughts are same, 'An amateurish attempt which turned out so beautifully.'

    It has that flow which we long for in poetry.

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    1. thanks again....a true appreciation is another thing which we all long for..isn't it? :)

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