Monday, October 14, 2013

Society


A slightly old poem...but thought of publishing it nevertheless...so here it is....


Engulfing the freedom, they tried to capture it
But could they to achieve?

Playing the game of deceit,
They lost
to the plot of trust I placed

Sleeping with a body of steel
On their
Bed of thorns,

I used an eraser of strength
On the
Painting of pain, they drew around me

I seek the shelter of love
When they
poured the rain of hatred

Are they still to succeed? 

8 comments:

  1. It's a good thing that you published it.
    A thought provoking poem indeed! :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Nikhil...hope to see you here again! :)

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  2. Indeed very Lovely and Thoughtful.. :)

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  3. Are they still to succeed?
    Social norms can be difficult but can not defeat if one is sure of oneself.
    Nice poem.

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    1. You actually gave the answer to my entire poem...
      Thanks chinkslounge for visiting :)

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